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This was interesting! I really liked your use of linkappends, or whatever they're called in Harlowe, for Alice's rationalization of what was happening to her (or possibly Macie's reassurances?).

After writing that ↑ first bit ↑ I took a look behind the curtain in order to find out what Harlowe's linkappend equivalent is called, but I was surprised to find that you actually had a good amount of the second half drafted up! That was interesting to read too!

If you want a bit more traffic on this page, adding the "transformation" tag will make it a lot easier for readers to find.